honda S2000 jgtc-ish

[hurnybaby]

been posting this in the wip forum, just finished
think it might need a little work in a couple of places, but overall im quite proud of this one

brushed a fair amount of this one, only thing c+p were the rims

right, enough talking. heres the original incase you didnt see the wip thread



and heres mine




let me know what you think

[Gimpee]

that is sick...great job!

[hurnybaby]

thanks gimpee
any suggestions for improvements?

[Lille Buller]

Wery nice!

Tho i think the spoiler looks a bit thin..
When that rise rocket hits the 220mph mark it vil snap of like a bad hair style...

[MRDETROITMETAL]

Nice brushing !!!....I would slow down on the "wibbly woblies" tho...ya know all those vents an scoops an stuff, they kinda detract from your work IMO.
You got some skills there Bro,...just smooth it together an slam it down on the DESIGN...you could come up with an awesome Pix !!!!

[X-Raited Creations]

thats insane. I love the design and all. You should cover up the inntakes with a mesh.
The diffuser is toony, and somehow it looks so tiny, thin. I love the wheels though i would give them some more contrast and make them a tad darker.

The background was a really nice choice. it gives the car a very nice atmosphiere.

Keep it up.

[jackdarton]

yeah its a very nice chop... looks very amuse-esque especially the side. nice work bro, the mistakes have been mentioned above like blurry parts, wobbly lines etc but all in all its a nice chop, congratz

[Silverbullet]

Awesome work love it

[BlindDub]

Very aggressive, you've got great style!

I wouldn't doubt that you may be seeing one of these nominated for Septembers chop of the month

[hurnybaby]

thanks everyone for the kind words, really helps motivate me to do more with you guys helping me along
now that i look at it, i can completely see where everyone is coming from with the bad points...the spoiler does look a little weedy :P
the diffusor was one of the problems i had with it too, i went through a few designs til i came up with that one, but i just havent a clue what to do to it to make it 'uncartoony'
but thicken it up i shall do
and thanks x-raited, i wouldnt have noticed the wheels if you hadnt said
thanks again everyone